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Working in SAI again. I enjoy using SAI to paint and Photoshop to touch up. I think I will make this my typical workflow.
Hey look, I did a warm piece. What's happening to me?!?!
Hey look, I did a warm piece. What's happening to me?!?!
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Alright, let's give this a shot!
I quite like this, the back-lighting is very nice and the overall design is pleasant.
Now then, with the stairs, I don't quite get the sense of their descending. They look more like lines in the floor, which they could be, I suppose.. So I think some shadow there to give it a sense of depth would have been good.
I can't figure out her back left leg (our left). The thigh seems to flare out as thick as her chest, which seems a little strange. Her front right (our right) and left (you get the point) legs don't seem to come out of the body at the same point, either.
Ah, the wings of course are a little... uh... different.
I notice that around her right wing and a bit around her left, the background in nonexistent.
I think her horn is angled to the right too much. The mane looks fabulous, however.
Don't get me wrong, this is a fabulous piece, but there are definitely a few more minor details you can get better at. So, cheers and best of luck in future pony endeavors! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>