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January 18, 2013
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Commission for Rex42 by DarkFlame75 Commission for Rex42 by DarkFlame75
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:icongyrik22:
Hey DarkFlame! Long time no chat, as 'twere. Anyway, since you're just in the sketch phase I'll just toss a coupla nitpicks.

- Neck is kind of thick for Luna, and the head's a touch blocky. The princesses are more swan-like; I'd look at turning the line which is the back of the neck slightly counter clockwise, so it parallels the other side of the neck, and accentuating the S-curve.

- Luna's left back foot doesn't feel like it's planted super-solidly on the ground. This might be something to just fix with shading, up to you!

Minor stuff; nice foundation sketch! Solid anatomy for a princess, can definitely tell you've been arting.

~ Dazh

PS - Just a solid three stars down the middle for the sketch. Looking forward to the finished product!
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This is really a beautiful draw! i love her and i think you do a good job. The Technique is amazing. and the color, i love blue and i think this is a optimal color for her. But the mane is wrong (just the tail). But I love too the Originality and the pose... are so amazing! Well, Amazing =) What programme do you use for made this technique? i want to try it! because to you came it so cute!
Sorry for my bad english and this is my first critique. i hope you understand. This is my critique and i love you draw and the way you draw all!
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Kn16h7 Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wow, I love this. This may be "The One.".

I don't catch many chances to see you draw Luna, i really hope i can make one of your next streams and get a request in.
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DarkFlame75 Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm not sure what you mean by it being "The One." It's certainly not my best, if that's what you mean.
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Kn16h7 Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I have this sort of troll going where when i find an artwork about Luna that i like more than most i post a comment similar to "This is .The One.'.".
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DarkFlame75 Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Ah, got it.

Well I can show you a number that are better than this...
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Kn16h7 Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I dont know why, but i just really like something about how you did this one.
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Adding a glow around the eyes with just the lighter color looks really awesome!
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